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I like the story but everything goes almost too smoothly. There's not much tension because everything goes perfectly for the koi. People who be likes get lucky and people who try to attack him get severely reprimanded. I was reading this in conjunction with "Dare to Take Me as a Stand-in?" and honestly got them confused - there were parts of each story that felt like they came from each other. I think the lead couple in this story are more reasonable though. And I love the cute relationship between the koi and his brother.
