Overlimit Skill Holder Chapter v2 epilogue 2 Discussion

  • Thread starter Patherornt
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  • #1
It had potential but got ruined.

I'll just make it simple, the author is trying too hard to make the story edgy. Like every other reviewers said it got bad because of the time skip.
 
  • #2
This the second book I've read that you have written, I loved both books, thank you for continuing to amaze me with your wonderful stories.
 
  • #3
omg . i loved it you are a very talented writer. I look forward to more of your writings
 
  • #4
trying to fix it - in astounded but sebastians calmness and power, and helios, has always been portrayed as brutal, dominant etc, but the last chapter? it was sweet how it ended. I can't wait to read more later.
 
  • #9
storyline was good but there is many grammer errors. Especially towards the end of the story, the gender was indicated wrongly.
 
  • #13
This was a very fun read. I do think the end is a bit awkward and needs to be written better, but it was a happy ending. This writer has a great voice that will keep you entertained and laughing.
 
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