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It's not bad. I personally found volume 2 to be where it starts to get better as the first volume is, admittedly, boring. And it's not just about the fact that the MC is weak in it, but also that it lacks any direction and has a slow pace. Volume 2, however, improves on almost every aspect.Writing + Grammar: It is as to be expected from a translated Eastern novel. Don't expect anything sound, literary wise. The current translations in Light Novels Translations are significantly better than the ones at Foxaholic. So just read their translations only. Overall, the writing is fine and shouldn't be too distracting if you are a casual reader from Novel Updates.The Characters: Meh. The characters who debuted in the 2nd volume are more three dimensional and unique. As well as the fact they act more realistic. I found myself lacking any interest in the first volume's characters as they tended to be too good to be true and too convenient. Moreover, only 1 or 2 of them were actually interesting.Harem: The MC is still a little child. So far, there only seems to be 2 possible harem members, but what I find gladdening is that there's no focus on any harem aspects (yet!). Considering the author's other novel, he might make this one similar in that there's only 1 love interest the MC cares about but has a group of women pining for his affection. As for th
