The Nth Day of Being Able to Read Minds Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Sunshine001
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  • #11
OMG omg love all of the alpha books and I dint think I can wait for the update ,do you know ow when the update will be ?
 
  • #13
I'll still stan your novel while waiting, this Perfect anyway!
 
  • #14
i’ve read this so many times and each time is just better and better. seriously can’t wait for the next book!!
 
  • #15
I need more hope in books. Stella needs to have someone help her escape. Gwen can trap and drug Weston so he can feel first hand what he did to Stella by taking her freedom. She needs to build her life and hopefully pregnant so the reader and the character finally gets some happiness.
 
  • #16
It is an interesting concept with the story being different than the usual plots and I’m committed to finishing. It needs editing, there are contradictions in the story line. Also, I’m frustrated with the slow pace of development in the plot. It feels like it goes around in circles unnecessarily.
 
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