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It's OK, has good moments but it's not great. I'm on the verge of dropping it despite really liking the heroines.Pro
- I'm always happy with "transmigrated into a petty villain" stories.
- Some of the heroines are fun. Potential harem seems interesting overall.
- The writing style isn't very good. It looks like the author is padding with useless repetitions. An action is executed, the action is repeated with some flavour text, then it's explained in details in a third repetition. Here an example :"Spatial translocation?"I looked around."Could this be" "Excellent. Yes, it's spatial translocation magic." Professor Karen's words turned the teaching assistants expressions sour. "Pro, Professor! Spatial translocation magic is too dangerous..."They were right. Spatial translocation magic was a very high level and dangerous magic. A small mistake could result in the body being torn to shreds and death. So their reaction was understandable.Of course once or twice is fine, but every time or almost every time, it's boring to read.
- I don't like the MC. He's supposed to be transmigrated into a bad person, but after a while he's just as petty as the original character, simply because after all "he's already having a bad reputation". Weird logic.
- "Smirking", MC seems to like smirking triumphally every few sentences, it's very annoying.
- The story is too simple. It's basically (so far), "MC is underestimated, he is mocked, then he does the impossible, the peanut gallery is in awe, and MC smirks triumphally". This is fine per se as an idea, but not as the only thing going on. It lacks the spices to make it worth the experience. I expect more than basic Chinese story face slapping levels from such a story.
