The Extra of The Bad Ending Game Chapter 59 Discussion

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  • #1
Terrible writing style and plot development.

MC transmigrated into a character that is not the protagonist, an extra. This is how a chapter usually goes:

  • He proceeds to do something that, as the protagonist, he has never done before.
  • 70% of the chapter is then wasted explaining why he did what he did, the possible repercussions of the action and other considerations.
  • As you would expected, other characters are surprised by the MC's actions since he has changed.
  • MC, despite knowing that what he did was bound to elicit some reactions, spends like 8 paragraphs being surprised at what he did.
There are also problems with repetition, as pointed out in pomoli's review, but they were quite generous with the rating. Aside from that, the characters feel one-dimensional, and considering the number of clichés, you can guess how 90% of the developments will unfold, but you still have to go through a dozen paragraphs of telling you how things unfolded, how, and why.
 
  • #2
LOVED this book! I'm assuming there is a second book, so now I'm on the hunt!
 
  • #4
OMG! Finally fellow readers! Anne decided and I hope it will be a success. I wish when the time comes, she’s stronger, wiser, and smarter. If you can guess what was happening by just reading this excitement and my well wishes for Anne, then you are RIGHT!
 
  • #7
I loved this book. The story line was amazing and kept me on my toes the entire time. I fell in love with certain characters and had a growing hatred for another. Definitely check this book out.
 
  • #8
the alpha series is actually one of the best collection
 
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