Death Progress Bar Chapter 3 Discussion

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  • #1
Currently on chapter 3 and somehow during these 3 chapters MC gave away all his inheritance, attempted su*cide, ran away, we then got a giant time skip and he somehow worked at multiple jobs, which wasn't even descibed just briefly mentioned.

I may be a be being biased in this review but I prefer to read about the MC going from weak to strong/poor to rich. I want to read about the the struggles of applying for these jobs, how he felt being alone and on the run from his family, But no..

We got a giant time skip and 50 crazy things are happening at once, it was kind of funny, but I was expecting to read something for complex with a weak to strong trope, but it def wasn't what I expected to read.

Just image the plot of solo leveling, rushed arcs, kind of cliche wattpad fanficiton disolgue, worst pacing ever, and the connections/bonds with the side characters is not there at all. Like even if I got to chapter 100 I don't think I would care or feel sympathy for any of these characters that might die.

When I want to read a novel I want to feel the emotions in the writing. Like how the MC may be struggling, I want to feel the connections and bonding with other characters in the book, and most of all I want to be interested in the story. But so far it's a no.

I know judging a book on just 3 chapters is s*upid, but this is just my thoughts so far.. And idk if it gets better or not. Also no hate to the author or the people who enjoy this novel. I'm simply saying my thoughts on these 3 chapters so far.

(I also got baited by the amount of 5 star reviews, so I guess that's another reason why I'm a bit disapointed)

(and the only reason I said the pacing was really bad, was because somehow MC has made friends with so many people in just 3 chapters, and I'm just like what?? It wasn't even written about how they starting becoming friends, it was just in the bit where it mentioned how it was now a couple months later.)
 
  • #2
either Tapish,anshul or anaysha will die,but there are high chances that anishta will die giving him the punishment which she desires to see him burning in fire dying every moment worse than death.But every character has suffered.Anaysha was the result of Tejwant bloody bet,though she survived but
 
  • #6
Love triangle between step brother and his enemy, I like the sound of this. A few chapters, and it's already caught you in it's web.

Definitely a good, scratch that, the best read.
 
  • #7
The book is very good. It’s intriguing, minor errors. It’s spicy and pulls you in. I do feel the ending was very rushed and I would have like more wrap up with the characters but there is a sequel that is starting got very good.
 
  • #8
Wow! It has a jaw dropping plot twist as I read the synopsis. It's very amazing! Gonna recommend this to other readers ?
 
  • #10
From the beginning to the end, I enjoyed each chapter. Keep up the good work!! I know is not easy being a creative writer
 
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