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Grammar: 1.5~3/5 (Starts off around a 2.5 in the early chapters, makes it up to a 3, before nosediving to a 1.5 in the later chapters) Writing: 2/5Story: 2/5All in all, below average.The grammar for this series is all over the place, but the later chapters hit rock bottom with very simplistic, almost toddler-ish English. The writing throughout the entire series is a bit below average in that it makes its point (most of the time) but still lacks flavor or even consistency. The story is a bunch of generic cliches slapped together without anything original.I was enjoying it up until the English started to go "Baby-talk" on me, but I personally like cliche stories.Not a recommended read if you don't want your characters devolving into Baby-talk mid-way through the series.