- #1
The author needs more time to describe location descriptions, some slight world building. Honestly, the writing feels lacking. I hoped there were more descriptions of a tall structure that had a history of something cool, or something that describe the layout of the MC's home or room.Despite lacking good description, the MC's character growth matches well with her impatience to get revenge, and spoiling it herself with her impulsive actions. This is actually a good thing. It shows how the MC can't handle pretending anymore to be kind to someone she hates, and it makes her more rich in character. Not many people can keep their head above smoke that suffocate them.The MC encouraging and humouring the "commoner" is also funny. She's respectful and open-minded, she doesn't mind accompanying her friend to the library. Although she knows his secret identity, she's willing to help him hide it. In this way, she's very down-to-earth, and a good friend. It's good that she hasn't lost part of her kindness in the past-future.TBC
