The Transmigration Survival Guide Chapter v17 Discussion

  • #1
A poorly written soft core fetish novel about a loli succubus and her adoptive "Daddy."

No matter what other reviews say, the author's focus isn't the story. They're practically tripping over themselves to rush through the opening and get to the fetish content, which isn't good for story telling. Additionally, if you've listened to the cringy dialogue of a p*rno, you know what to expect from the novel overall with how forced everything is.

Content aside, just it isn't written very well.
 
  • #3
I loved reading this book and the first one : \"The Lycan King\". The characters are so vivid in tour mine. I couldn't put my cellphone or my kindle down. Bring on BJ's story.
 
  • #5
Grammar is horrible.  Names are messed up.  Chapters are repeated.  And how can this story be issued as completed when we are left hanging with no sort of actual ending?
 
  • #7
I love it!! Do you have an update schedule?
 
  • #8
it's a good book but I would have liked it a little more if the alpha would had less say in the sex part and he would have came into her wolf side more but none the less is was God read
 
  • #9
when's the next update? can't wait to see what happens next!
 
  • #10
Mirun ako nyan komplet episod na Chaatt nyu lang ako sa fcevok #pwd na mabasa offline
 
  • #11
Loved how all the characters evolved and bloomed to be amazing people! Good work
 
  • #13
I am enjoying reading this. Not yet done as I run out of coin
 
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