The Transmigration Survival Guide Chapter v1 prologue Discussion

  • Thread starter CAESAR20ViO
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  • #1
I would have given this a 4, but the main character can be a prude about the dumbest things. The MC practically acts as if he's allergic to women half of the time. Whenever he sees a naked woman, although they themselves think nothing of the circumstance, the MC will not fail to spill his spaghetti everywhere on the floor and soil his pants in the process while clamoring for clothes to be worn. It wouldn't be far-fetched to imagine that this guy was a Franciscan friar in his original world. This is incredibly annoying to deal with every other chapter, noone I know would start squeaming over a pair of uncovered breasts.

Other than this nuisance of a character trait, the plot does seem quite interesting, it reads much like a Kingdom Building novel set in a other-world fantasy. If the main character grows some balls anytime soon I might bump up the rating but for god's sake, can we just get over this trope already? Grown men cowering in front of a woman's body, these MC's obviously need testosterone therapy with how spineless they are.
 
  • #3
it was an amazing book, I really loved it.
 
  • #4
the story is good so far but don't drag it so much it wl b boring
 
  • #5
There doesn't seem to be a genre this author can't tackle to perfection. I need more chapters because i am HOOKED!
 
  • #6
Interesting premise and likable enough characters, however you really need to proofread before publishing. Honestly there were so many errors it was difficult to get through.  Great imagination and potential, but your writing skills need a lot of work.
 
  • #9
wonderful..I really enjoyed reading it.love the author ability too
 
  • #10
Awesome loved every second I spent reading this novel and every coin was worth it can’t wait for your next completed book
 
  • #11
Update: the sequel is still being released on 1st December. It was posted early but had to be taken down due to myself being harassed by a troll. It will be reposted on December 1st but WONT be daily updated. More info will be posted soon :)
 
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