- #1
So far it reminds me of Hello, Wife! Both female leads are very calm and almost calculative towards love and romance, though Su Rui has more of a human touch. I don't agree with the logic she and her mother apply to marriage and blind dates respectively, and it astonishes me that a 20 year old girl is being pushed to start thinking about (albeit future) marriage. The parents' attitude towards their daughter's studying and working hard is also mind-boggling.The McGuffin of the world of the story actually being a novel is completely unnecessary and pointless. The author has to break the 4th wall to let us know that the "story" isn't going according to plan, or what "should" have happened. Let us see if things spice up when the "story's" FL makes her entrance. Much could be forgiven if she becomes a friend of our FL. Rather than being her enemy. The pacing is a mess, with static conversations between the FL and her parents taking up much of the time.The ML is decent, though incredibly, and hilariously, dense.
