- #1
I enjoyed it right up until just before the engagement party... The story had done this weird time skip and then kept changing to past tense and even in-the-moment it went back to present tense and was disjointed. At ch 61 I lost all interest. The story felt more like the author wanted to have a specific scene and then in the VERY NEXT SCENE it denied the cycle bit that had been mentioned before...Anyways... I did find the dialogue between characters, females and males were well done and felt natural. The common sense MC was SO much appreciated. The conversation between socialites based on business relationships and the thought and intelligence that goes into being a functioning cog in that type of environment was very well portrayed. Also, the hijinks of the two mom’s, as a mom, their actions had me rolling!
