Doberman Chapter 32 Discussion

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  • #1
The story is really interesting so far. Usually in stories like this (involving the mafia and smut etc.) the FL is always strong and she knows how to kick ass. However, it's kinda cool to see another FL that's not that OP and is just desperate to do things because of the people she loves (her sister and nephew). She has her own weaknesses but she's not fragile either.

The more she learns about the place, the stronger she becomes. She has a really good character development so far. Also, the misunderstandings are easily cleared up in the early chapters which is very good.

I also love the ML because he asks for her consent first before doing anything *ehem*.

Spoiler

Anyway, when she said stuff like "don't lay a finger on me, the ML agree. like "ok sure, so if you don't want me to touch you then I'll just m*sturbate in front of you" (trust me, this scene was so hot)

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Spoiler

The masturbating scene was ch 22 I think, or somewhere in early 20s. And their first night was ch 30.

Trust me, it isn't like some other smut with bland and "meh" scenes.... their scenes are really hot hahaha

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  • #7
well done author its a very good story and no dragging so far
 
  • #8
author did u updated the life of lies novel today just wanna ask bcoz i wanna make sure that nothing is wrong with my app now too
 
  • #9
I run out of coins and stopped reading this but I decided to start again and found myself drawn into the story just cos MJ is so feisty.
 
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