Doberman Chapter Completed Discussion

It was such a great storyline. The plot was interesting. Characters was flawed and complex. Their development throughout was good. It was a dark romance with each characters has their own trauma and dilemmas which led them to their decisions.

The story was really interesting, with a mixture of adult drama, action, romance, and smut, it was overall good. My only concern was the translation. I thank the translator for putting such an effort but to be honest, it s**ked. It ruined the flow of the story, the intensity, the emotions.

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The misuse of she/he was I often encounter with the story. Yuri (ML right hand), I get confused whether she was a girl or a boy bcoz again--the translation. He was a MAN. Another, Hayan/White (FL nephew), some chapters he was referred to as a girl and some chapters reffered him as a boy, I was like WTF? But he really is a boy. I read some spoilers on the forum. Sometimes, I get confused who are talking, whom speaking to who, and the lack of coherent also. It was so bad, I thought I should have dropped it but the story was promising and I would like to know their relationship progress. Plus, some scenes doesn't makes sense to me or maybe bcoz of the translation? But it was really off. The ending was good, but I really hope there was more, like give us deep, heart-wrecking, fluffy ending!

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But anyways, give it a try. The storyline was really good. And the characters were interesting also. Hope other sites will translate it tho. (Hope the NoveltyRead (?) translation) *fingers crossed*