My Daughter Is Trying to Change the Law So That She Can Marry Me, Her Daddy, but She Doesn’t Know That She Is a “Stepdaughter” Chapter 27 Discussion

  • #1
I really don't know were they are going with that past storyline.

Like, the chick does fully acknowledge that she has no right to expect love for her anymore. She died accepting that.

It feels like the chapters are meant to make us feel sorry for her but it just revealed that she was not forced into anything but was just a coward.

But again, she fully acknowledges that she was just a coward and deserves to die alone so it's not like there is much going on there.

I do give it props though for the chick sticking to her guns.

She and the MC never got together (as in, the mother of that chick) like they would have in many other stories.

She acknowledged that it would make her even lower than she already is to try and be together with him.

Edit: This was supposed to be 2 stars
 
  • #2
Well written but I felt it was lacking some intimacy among the mates and the ending was as climatic as I was hoping. Very little of the happily ever after; Cole doesn’t really connect with his kids; just felt something was missing. I also thought a few chapters weren’t as relevant.
 
  • #6
I've attempted to read this story 3-4 times and I can't finish it. The dialogue is choppy or missing several parts, same with just basic details. It's a shame bc the book has a decent storyline, it's just so badly written.
 
  • #8
the author lengthen notes is killing me  it's unnecessary Long and annoying sometimes just make it short like two lines is enough and it's not necessary you but author notes in every chappy  use that space to make the chapters longer thank you
 
  • #10
Can’t wait for Caspian’s story. This book was amazing ...!!!
 
  • #12
the book is nice but the chapters mmmmm they are like to short notes write long paragraphs not a second the chapter is gone just destroying coins.
 
  • #13
I loved the book. kudos to the writer! ❤️??
 
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