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Overall plot is great, with a well thought out world, and lots of interesting twists on the setting. It feels like the author is good at that type of thing, but leaves a lot of other pieces by the wayside. Scene and POV transitions occur with no breaks, which makes following along very difficult. It's hard to follow who is talking since none of the quotes are attributed.Translation is just okay as well, very little editing, and random MTL issues causing names to fail to be consistent.
