Becoming a Bread Bag Villain in a Superhero Story Chapter 13 Discussion

  • #1
The start of a nice ‘villain’ story.

Up to chapter 13 has had good promise and I personally like the MC’s power as well as his standing compared to others regarding power hierarchy. Sometimes there is confusing grammar when switching from talking about a man’s actions to a girls reaction (e.g. Robert gave his all to the job, but she ended up in a worse place. After Rose heard that she decided he needed a chance (not in-text just an example,)) but overall it is a smooth read.

I hope the translator and author continue writing as this is an enjoyable read and it will stay in my phone as a story I’ll check up on every few days for updates.
 
  • #2
Excellent! This has been an outstanding read. It made me cry, ready to fight and laugh. Awesome storyline and written well. Author you are now on my favorite list. I will be reading more of your completed works.
 
  • #5
I feel so sad why Noah Enrique died??? Huhuhuhu I like him for Emma.. Please update the chapters more per day!! Thanks!
 
  • #6
This may be the best story I’ve ever read. Ever. Absolute perfection, thank you Muse.
 
  • #8
Wow, there are multiple plot twists at every corner
 
  • #11
I've stopped reading, I will not read another dumb storyline with Sylvia & O'dell with yet another whore trying to get him & her heartbreak. John & Sherry is the storyline that should finish. Not the same crap with Odell, 600 Chapters with Tara & then Lily for 200 chapters. Ridiculous!
 
  • #12
i loved. I wish they could have the other kid so he can have the fatherly experience.
 
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