I Became The Villain The Hero Is Obsessed With Chapter 339 Discussion

I basically binge read 339 chapters in like 5 days. It's a fun story but goddam that first translator from galaxy really ruins it. The 2nd translator that takes over is much better.

If you can somehow read past that the story is pretty fun. There are plot holes EVERYWHERE! Like the author truly doesn't give a f*ck.

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if you have a hero that acts as a natural deterrent to stopping villain from acting up at night at all, YOU DONT REPORT TO THE MEDIA WHEN HES INJURED. Like what the heck!

Btw cities realistically can never be 100% fully evacuated. It's against human nature. Disabled people. Sleeping people. Hell even brain dead people need time to be evacuated. It's just not realistic to make a building completely empty.

author also loves to emphasize how weak mc's teleportation and levitation abilities are but halfway thru the story the author thrus that gimmick out the window because him being that weak was ruining the story. So the author quietly buffed and hoped nobody would notice. I noticed and appreciated it. In this world powers don't get stronger, just more efficiently used. So slightly increasing his power like that is actually another plot hole.

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but besides, the horrible translation and absolutely glaring plot holes, the story is a fun low steaks story with a slow burn romance side plot. I had fun reading it. WARNING: THIS IS NOT A YANDERE STORY. It's a sweet slow burn story. Yes there are a few Yandere dream sequences that mearly poke fun at the Yandere genre but the characters never actually fully commit to it.

this also definitely not a harem. The author just really likes writing girl characters I guess. Which he is self aware about and yet keeps doing it.