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Idk if this applies to everyone but for me the writer has a given a bit too much of the MC thinking to himself, there's three to five paragraphs of thought between each action, what should have been a fast paced action feels like a turn based fight, furthermore the information given is just repeated, there's nothing new you!Spoiler
When fighting Amethyst, he explains 3 times that without a sacred weapon a person is basically useless, which we have already been told for the past 15 or so chapters already!
[collapse]Other then that, the story's good and you should just read it.
