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It has a pacing problem. There's a lot of jesus-sama. I'd have love this with better pacing because the star design is REALLY cool. Which I think that is what the author really wants to play with more. I feel like though I can take it as is and it's pace isn't fully awful. I like if they did a better job of developing these "hints" of side characters but I'm an alcoholic who always developed alts in rpgs. People running around in wooden armor is cool but I'd like it better if he'd use the dwarf and all the power he has to actually be smarter about the "human/magical" power in his village.But this concept of insta build village stuff is something I've seen like three times and I'm kind of wondering where it will be going.
