Fun Territory Defense of the Easy-Going Lord ~The Nameless Village Is Made Into the Strongest Fortified City by Production Magic~ Chapter 66 Discussion

  • #1
The territory keeps developing, but not the characters. The MC still the same child as he is in the 1st chapter, literally nothing changed about him. Arte too, most of the time she just got ignored altogether. Even though her background story can be expanded upon so much.

It feels so directionless so far.
 
  • #3
the beginning is confusing and also the grammar is abit fresh I would like to read it but sadly I don't want to spend coins on this
 
  • #4
I love this book.. it made me cry and laugh alot
 
  • #5
‘twas a good read though..anyways the next chapter is too long too long to wait
 
  • #7
dear queen author pleaseeee..... double update pleaseeee......
 
  • #8
When is there going to be new chapters
 
  • #9
Loved this book!!! Read it all in two days!! Such a great story.
 
  • #10
Nevermind. Apologies accepted and i hope  no error in the future. God bless you and to your family.
 
  • #11
The story line is a bit unbelievable and has “grooming” tendencies.
 
  • #13
I think from the few chapters the story is running too slow plzz continue writing with your old chapters pace for us not to lose interest
 
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