- #1
I like the concept and the plot but the MC and character feel so shallow. They can be shocked, happy, sad, or emotional, but you can't understand them. It's like a light switch on and off emotion. Also, the convenience and the coincidence of the plot/story feel unnatural. I'm thinking maybe because the character introduces is one of the strongest and not the usual weak to strong character that I don't have enough information that's why it feels unnatural.