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The writing quality is good, and the narrative has great potential. Unfortunately, it is fatally hindered by a poor primary plot, complete lack of character growth, a useless system that only serves to delay and artificially prolong the narrative, and increasingly outlandish sub-plots that fail to motivate the characters in any realistic manner.It could be said the male lead of the primary plot shows character development, but it is done in a way that is so outlandish and unbelievable, as well as increasingly severe as the story progresses, that unless the author chooses to totally ignore logical personality growth he will be the most extreme villain of the entire work by the time of the primary plot's conclusion.
