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every time she woke up in the real world, she'd act like a mad woman out for her sister's life (which is, arguably, understandable considering her experiences) but her behavior is unbecoming of her status. And if I were to see her act like that, I would be more inclined to doubt her (and her psychological state) because she's acting a bit unreasonable.
I understand that her time is running out, but if she could use that small window of time to maybe gather evidence against her sister's malicious plots or say some convincing and logical speech that will get her point across her father, then it would've been more effective and efficient rather than recklessly attacking her sister.
[collapse]And the system is also very annoying. The entire purpose of the quick transmigration itself was to increase the lifespan of the protagonist, but instead of steadily increasing, a bunch of nonsensical events keep happening that forces the MC's life to stay stagnant. I don't even need to see the later arcs to guess that this phenomena will continue for majority of the series, prolonging the entire novel, with the rate they are going. The system is a scam.SpoilerIt takes advantage of the protagonist and spends her points on drugs and other props that basically reverts the MC's condition to how she started in the novel — which is bedridden and dying. And I can't believe that the MC never points that fact out and confronts the system. She just accepts everything as a matter of fact, which was disappointing because it felt like she didn't care about prolonging her life at all.
Besides, the existence of the system seems like it's only there to ridicule the protagonist, spend her points, and such things. I don't even get how it developed such a personality, it just suddenly did. And he's really getting on my nerves.
[collapse]As for the ML, I currently have no problems with him. Anyway, he's apathetic so I understand why he wouldn't care about the protagonist before he completely recovered his emotions. I guess I'm just lowkey sympathizing with him because he experiences all those heartbreaks in each arc without knowing that the protagonist is just doing all that to gain his favorability (love).Overall, this novel ain't the worst, but it's not that good either. Just so-so, I guess.