Quick Transmigration System: Male God, Come Here Chapter -- Discussion

  • #1
Author completely forgot that the female protoganist is supposed to be a cool boss girl, smart strong etc etc

She is basic...

Just using the pitiful expression and being obedient is so creepy and completely different than her supposed personality.

It is just too boring.

Sad that it could have been much better.

If not why write her like this, just make her a highschool student girl so it would fit the personality she shows most of the time
 
  • #2
I don't think you can up date fast enough to shut us all up this is one great story thank you
 
  • #3
this is exciting story i hope it will go smoothly till the end
 
  • #6
awesome fabulous fantastic story just loved it there chemistry ❤ every scene every dialogue every chapter everything is so awesome n interesting ❤loved it
 
  • #7
You could not make her defend her self  and why not made her in college
 
  • #8
Nice story it is taking too long for updates it has been almost 1 year still this book is not done
 
  • #9
loved the story. i am wondering about the sequel.
 
  • #10
Just yes. I loved Her Forbidden Alpha and I loved this one too! Starting your third book now!
 
  • #11
well written story, good character descriptions. very few typos.
 
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