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This isn’t worth your time to read, but if you have nothing else to do and have lots of free time in an afternoon, it's not the worst thing as a time killer either.The world is bare bone, it’s basically dead.The characters are bland, if I have to write a profile for each of them I can fill out with just a few words. Beside occasional clothing descriptions, there isn’t any physical descriptions for any characters at all.The chapters are extremely short. I don’t know if it was the raw or the TLs, the chapters are just strings of incoherent thoughts. The characters most of the time just say ‘Yes’ and that’d be it.The TLs quality is not good either, basically a lot of chapters lack proof reading and lots of grammatical errors.
