- #1
The amount of nervousness she has dealing with ML as a child is ridiculous.The story would have been better to make her an actual child instead of reborn as a child, because it is completely unconvincing that she has an adult brain in there. If she were an actual child, the misunderstandings that she lets continue instead of just talking would be understandable (though they might still be annoying). If they gave her a background of having social anxiety, maybe that would make things make some sense also, but the only time she has issues is in order to make things awkward with the ML so you can't call it a personality trait.Again and again, she realizes the misunderstanding, then instead of dealing with it in any practical way, she freezes, fails to do much of anything, then comes up with a scheme that might make sense for an actual child, but is beyond annoying when the perspective is supposed to be an adult.There are parts of the story that are enjoyable and cute, but her interaction with the ML (which is the primary focus of the story) is ruined by her being so caught up in his supposedly being sensitive to the point where she can't act honest with him (despite the story trying to claim she has an honest personality otherwise). It's causing me to stop the story early instead of giving it a proper try.
