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A really cute story with a lot of potential.The chapters are short and straight to the point, every time I'm done reading I feel like there was so much more that could've been said about each event and character. It's a shame because the majority of chinese novels end up tiresome when authors talk too much to inflate their world count, but this one suffers from the opposite, at times it feels like it's a bit rushed.I wish the author would've spend more time in certain scenes and interactions between characters, but regardless I had a really good time reading and I'm looking forward to what else the story will present in the future.The translation is pretty good with some minor mistakes in grammar like the use of "him/her" sometimes being used for the wrong character, but the only real complaint I would have is that the chapters are split into two parts. Like I mentioned the chapters already feel short and after being split into two parts it makes them even shorter.
