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MC also often attracted hatred from other people for no apparent reason.
[collapse]However, not all the villains were defetead in the ending, for example:Spoiler- The rose and skull gang who kidnapped MC back then. I thought they would be a main villain but with the additional villains, they seemed to be forgotten in the end.
- The villain who killed MC's master back then. I don't know whether the villain was the one that was already defeated by MC and ML or there was someone else because the author didn't elaborate more.
- The villages that raised poisonous bug. Did MC and ML completely solve those?
- What about Bettina? Yun Ruoshan? Inoue family? There were still pretty much alive and kicking and even came to disgust MC from time to time.
There was also a mystery about MC and ML's 3 years contract. MC's master said that ML's aura would save MC from misfortune so they would have to get married for at least 3 years and after that, their fate would be broken. However in the past, they clearly married for 10 years although full of misunderstandings and fightings.
MC's master also tampered MC's body so she couldn't get pregnant for 3 years but somehow, she still got pregnant? However, as usual, no explanation from the author.
[collapse]MC and ML also didn't have any clear plan to avoid the future misfortune and chose to have a "go with the flow" attitude. MC only actively tried to change the future in the beginning of the story.SpoilerFor example: when she tried to warn her roommates about their future misfortune in a roundabout way and eventually changed their fate.
[collapse]Another thing that I found annoying was how Mary Sue and Gary Stu MC and ML were.SpoilerMany people would fall head over heels towards MC and ML. ML's suitors would be hostile towards MC and even schemed against her. MC repeatedly suffered grievance because of ML's suitors. And they're all so shameless, still stuck themselves to ML even though he already rejected them and he was already married to MC.
Meanwhile, MC's suitors weren't that antagonistic but they somehow kept obsessing over MC even though they knew she was married to ML. They even didn't hesitate to become a third party and encouraged MC to divorce ML and chose them instead which really disgusted me.
[collapse]In conclusion, I couldn't say that this was an enjoyable read even though rebirth story was one of my favorite genre. I think it would be better if the author made the scale of this story smaller and there was a clear main villain in the end.