- #1
The story is not bad, but I could not honestly say it's good either. I find it very superficial and contrived. If they were in a different type of business/industry, perhaps they could get away with the character setting for the ML, but it's the entertainment business, how can that even be? As for the FL, the author seems to be confused or couldn't make up his/her mind on how to portray her as -- a heroine or a delicate flower to be protected? The characters and the storyline are just not very believable.