The Former Wife of Invisible Wealthy Man Chapter 85 Discussion

  • #1
The story is not bad, but I could not honestly say it's good either. I find it very superficial and contrived. If they were in a different type of business/industry, perhaps they could get away with the character setting for the ML, but it's the entertainment business, how can that even be? As for the FL, the author seems to be confused or couldn't make up his/her mind on how to portray her as -- a heroine or a delicate flower to be protected? The characters and the storyline are just not very believable.
 
  • #4
Great read. Well written..had a few errors but that's to be expected. The main character had tantrums but she was not portrayed as annoying but more endearing, which I really liked. When they become annoying, it really turns me off the book. But all the characters' development was top notch. Bravo!!
 
  • #5
Absolutely loved this book. It kept me hoped then entire time. I’m looking forward to the next book.
 
  • #6
Ok a lot of spelling errors but other than that it’s got the making of a good book
 
  • #8
Sorry, sounds like a good story however it needs editing. There are too many grammar issues, he/she, him/her and tense issues. I couldn’t read more than a few pages.
 
  • #9
thank you for story please I'm looking forward for more chapter thank you
 
  • #12
the book is really great.. and even the title is eye catching..
 
  • #13
Would of have gave it 5 stars but the repeat on some chapters where I had to waste my coins was frustrating.
 
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