The Former Wife of Invisible Wealthy Man Chapter 15 Discussion

  • #1
First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude to the translator who managed to take time to translate this novel.

This book seems like it was written by a 15 year old who threw in as many tropes as possible. The premise is there and it has a lot of things that makes it promising but it is all ruined by sub-par writing and so many plotholes. I don't know whether its an issue of translation or it was written by the author in that manner to begin with. I compared the translated version and the MTL version and came to a conclusion that it was all down to the author's inability to give depth to a promising storyline.

Plothole No. 1

- there are no explanation given on how FL is able to see ghost. All of a sudden she can see ghost

No.2

-sure, she was a celebrity before she transmigrated that's why she is great

No.3

ML described as hot sh*t president of an entertainment company would be so willing to take back FL who chased after his nephew the whole time that she was married to ML before FL transmigrated. No logic whatsoever even if you want to write it in such a fantastical novel. ML is also sum hot sh*t male president who's better at hiding than a secret agent

I appreciate the effort that the author and translator took to complete/ translate this book but honestly, don't bother reading if you are used to reading well written novels.

This novel is juvenile and I would not deign to insult the other reviewers who rated it 5 stars but this novel really isn't it. I am more upset at the fact that it had such a good outline but the author failed to deliver it through due to the shoddy writing. I really wanted to like this book but I cannot go beyond chapter 15.
 
  • #3
I am lusting for more... Please don't stop writing. :)
 
  • #6
a very touching story more tears flowed my eyes while reading this.....
 
  • #7
plzzzzz update two chapters at once plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz for once listen to my appeal
 
  • #9
I like this book, the only think is the it repeats basically the same content when it changes POV between Mykayla and Dustin. I feel like it’s very unnecessary and a waste of time.
 
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