The Way of Life for a Terminal S-Class Hunter Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter AzizYaakoubi
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  • #12
Very short chapters, you’ll spend a fortune. Author strung out the story painfully slowly, with the hope of a build-up, only to abruptly end it. It wasn’t a “dramatic conclusion”, it seems the author maybe tired of stretching out mindless dialogue without a real plan for the storyline, and gave up.
 
  • #13
Great story! A few grammatical errors but nothing major!
 
  • #14
I am really hooked to this book, I can’t wait for Avery to fall helplessly in love with Anderson so I can see Trent’s reaction. Well done Lucia
 
  • #17
Im sure that whatever she did to him in the pass do not justify what he does to her now. I want her miles away from him, they are even. I get it, he is hurt but he constantly humiliates her, and he is supposed to love her. I dont understand how he can treat her like that.
 
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