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This suffers from 7th grade syndrome in a major way.The MC is unlikable and the other characters seem utterly irrational.The world setting is not well thought out, and his rational is heavily contrived. The only reason I can think of to have such a setting is so that the author doesn't have to come up with an actual believable world.Spoiler
They HAVE to abolish their laws to go in the dungeons...
OK.... but the author seems to have ignored that when they come OUT they could simply have everything 'taxed' or have special items 'requisitioned' for the 'public good'.
[collapse]I really don't understand how this got THREE "5 star" votes (and no others at this time).Save your brain cells, avoid this!