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It's actually not that bad. It's not that the FL doesn't have any common sense or some things were illogical, it's a bit realistic too. There's a common-thinking of realistic characters are smart and rational in their situations, but I think that what would be a more realistic character is if they share flaws with humans. That means they would sometimes react s*upidly, get emotional and make rash decisions, or be prideful.For example, Spoiler
Someone said 'why didn't the FL just get help from her rich uncle? She's in debt, right?' but if you put herself in her shoes, you'd understand why she couldn't. She left home and got scammed, she must've felt too humiliated to go to her uncle for help. Or maybe she was considerate enough not to bother her uncle with paying a humongous debt that wasn't even hers or his.
And then the thing about being tricked to going to the capital. Why didn't she ask for her uncle's connection? Maybe she wanted to be independent and not ask her uncle for more.
[collapse]I am looking forward for more chapters. This is really interesting.