- #1
I actually had the opportunity to read the story to completion and I can say whole heatedly that the author f*cked up a good premise and characters beyond all recognition. The reasons are:
- Creating the most generic harem in the history of harems
- Piss poor attempts to create suspense that fall pathetically flat because of the DBZ effect. (When a series runs into a situation of raising the bar too often, aka the Supernatural effect)
- The most moody and chunni of characters to ever exist. I swear this mofo starts out as a fantastic character and just degrades into every broody teenager ever.
- The most fantastical ending to what was set up to be dark fantasy ever. Spoiler
Everyone important to the protagonist lives, becomes immortal, and so on.
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