Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou (WN) Chapter v3,8 Discussion

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  • #1
The author has great ideas, but he has not yet managed to combine them into one coherent MC. One chapter the MC is an ally of justice, the next he goes KILL KILL KILL. Disappointing 2*. Maybe because I don't belong to the "have fun with guns & gundams in a fantasy world" fraction.

Some random thoughts:

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- The MC should ask the vampire girl for some flesh to improve

- The MC should chase down different "beasts" to get different abilities. This just gets swept under the rug.

- The MC's transformation period should have been way longer. Let him lay with broken bones in a crevice for a year, just being held alive by the God's Stone

- Why does the "super-rare" miraculous God's Stone suddenly got demoted to side-kick and simply turned into jewelry.

- The possessive vampire girl should have killed the rabbit girl the moment she appeared.

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  • #4
Like the stories overall. I found myself very annoyed by the author rambling on and on and on. Every single time Alora missed her mate it would drone on about his kiss, his touch, his smell, his smile. We get it! Could have cut out about 3 chapters worth of all that repitition.
 
  • #6
Nice! Can’t wait to read more. PS if I was Ava I would have taken cash out of spite. He was just rude.
 
  • #7
Emotions are real and volatile, especially the ex-husband.  He’s having a difficult time dealing with his ex moving on, lol.
 
  • #8
Only read if you willing to wait a long time for updates.  Author is currently writing 3 books on this app and writing 2 more at home.
 
  • #9
Loved the book’!  I absolutely loved this novel and currently reading the second one.
 
  • #10
It is such a good book. I like it so much. The twist and turn of this story gives me a rollercoaster of emotions..
 
  • #11
I’ve been reading this story since the start and Its a great storyline and idea but it’s been dragging on for  5+ chapters now. It’s not updated when the author claims. It’s frustrating to spend $$ on a book to have it updated once every 2-4 weeks when originally it was being updated 3 times a week.
 
  • #12
Started out interesting but eventually it was all over the place, hard to follow with lots of errors.
 
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