- #1
The author has great ideas, but he has not yet managed to combine them into one coherent MC. One chapter the MC is an ally of justice, the next he goes KILL KILL KILL. Disappointing 2*. Maybe because I don't belong to the "have fun with guns & gundams in a fantasy world" fraction.Some random thoughts:Spoiler
- The MC should ask the vampire girl for some flesh to improve
- The MC should chase down different "beasts" to get different abilities. This just gets swept under the rug.
- The MC's transformation period should have been way longer. Let him lay with broken bones in a crevice for a year, just being held alive by the God's Stone
- Why does the "super-rare" miraculous God's Stone suddenly got demoted to side-kick and simply turned into jewelry.
- The possessive vampire girl should have killed the rabbit girl the moment she appeared.
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