- #1
Unfortunately there were no more chapters after 16 so I was forced to stop reading. But the little I read wasn't very good. The beginning was slow, extremely slow and not very fun to read, once you get in the story you are waiting for him to get betrayed (because why else would you read this story) and its feels like it just takes way too long. The characters are unrealistically mean of course like every other one of these types of stories.Spoiler
and once he betrayed and falls down he loses his arm and then finds a magic rock to heal him. Which isn't too bad what I have a problem with is that they completely disregard the missing arm entirely. Did he regrow his arm and I missed it?! According to another reviewer he riding a motorcycle out of the dungeon and shooting his rail guns at the same time? How when he only has one arm?!
[collapse]Its not complete garbage and could be enjoyable to someone who isn't taking this story very seriously but to me personally, I found the inconsistencies too much to handle. Which is why I give this story a 2.5
