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I've read 200 chapters and I don't understand what can be stretched for another 500. A lot of water. This writing can be cut at least twice, it will only get better.I understand that the female character builds life and relationships in the family based on the upbringing of his time, and in the outback it does not even cause dissonance, because in the wilderness, and even in a closed society, and even such a bone as the village, mores change at times slower than in cities. But. The eighties. This is just a strong scrapping of a large part of the way of life. The eighties in China are very similar to post-revolutionary Russia, which became the USSR. (by the way, it is interesting that in China, the country of victorious socialism, the system of state free education and free medicine is much less developed than in Russia, as far as I know... I am shocked, there is a "medical policy" in Russia, in the presence of which you can cure your teeth for free or almost for free!!!.. when my cousin was in the Israeli army, he went to the hospital, because you can't let a free army doctor near living people...) OK. The eighties of China - birth control, industrial boom, recovery of the country after famine and war, large migrations of young people across the country. The heroine should be in a stupor from the difference in the way of life in the city and the village, plus a bunch of things ALIEN to her consciousness - the same technique. All the nonsense with the "spiritual source" is trite and boring cheating. The embroidery skill was used at the very beginning and abandoned. And the calm attitude of others to how much a person's behavior has changed overnight... three times HA! This is complete nonsense.I feel like an Incomparable Cucumber, but - squeeze out the water and throw away the mud!
