What if My Brother is Too Good?

hhahaha sounds great!! 

I just finished reading this story, and all I can say is I feel so unsatisfied. I don’t know if it’s because of the MTL or the plot, but everything just felt so incomplete. Even the ending with the original FL and how the MC and ML got together (which felt rushed). On second thought, everything felt rushed and there were some unanswered questions and some questions they just answered vaguely. We don’t know even know the motives of why some characters did any of the actions they did expect for the original FL. Even then, her reasoning was irrational and did not make any sense. The story doesn’t even have an epilogue and some characters that we have met in the beginning just vanished after a while with no mention of them again. When it came to the ML he just felt so bland. I don’t know if it’s because the author was hyping his character up as this amazing, untouchable, powerful person who no one could be close to or approach (even better than the MP) but he was just so cold, barely said any words and when he does respond it’s with a sentence or two words. He did not have any personality what so ever, and with his personality it did not make any sense for him to warm up to the MC just because her eyes reminded him of his mother, who he barely has any impressions or memory of (Honestly, he spoke a lot about the MC eyes because of how pure and clear they are). Which didn’t make sense because the MC intentions towards him wasn’t pure and clean. She literally approached him in order to use him for protection.  And also because she felt lonely (she just says this in order to get him to stay in the house, instead of moving like he was originally supposed to), even though the author mentions that he has never thought about his sister or ever spoke about her in the years that he knew her. And all of a sudden, his putting his plans on hold to be there for her? And even when he finds out the truth his helping her to suppress the news in order for her to be in the family. All the characters were all forgettable, and nothing about any of them stood out in any way or shape. 

Thank you very much for the spoilers! So MC actually have a really warm and loving family? She should ditch that old father of hers and go to the real family then. 

If you guys have any questions, I don’t mind answering them, but there would be some parts that I don’t know since I skimmed through some parts 

The original FL? We find out that someone in the background is helping her get her identity expose that she’s the original daughter. It started when the ML starts to investigate the FL and finds out their siblings, but his suspicious because someone basically lead them to it. So, when he decided to cover up the truth to make sure that the MC stays happy and oblivious. The person in the background decides to go to the media to expose the truth and bring doubt. MC starts panicking and ML senses something is wrong and tells her that no one in the family believes it. During this period the FL approaches the dad and tells him she’s his biological daughter, he had some doubts because when the maternal grandfather saw the FL in a trailer that both MC and FL were in he said that she looked exactly like his wife, and then the media coverage about the fake daughter. So, he took DNA samples and sent it to 3 hospital and they all came back positive. He feels guilty and brings the FL home and when the FL comes she apparently behaves entitled like it’s already her home. The dad tells MC to give FL a tour, so that he and the ML could discuss the situation, and when that happens the FL says something along the lines of ‘must be nice to live in a house like this’ and asks MC to show her the MC’s room so that she could know what she has so she could have it to and MC feels uncomfortable. Then the FL exposes the truth and the dad and ML hears her and the MC starts crying and the FL calls the dad, ‘dad’. The MC goes ‘what’s going on’ and leaves with the brother? And the dad excuses the FL behavior because ‘she doesn’t know better because she didn’t finish high school’ and he also felt relief that the MC knew the truth. The FL goes into social media to expose the truth and the dad legally changes her last name. The MC gets hate online. The ML is unhappy and the dad just keeps excusing FL’s behavior. The MC and FL finally see each other days or weeks later and the FL goes ‘aren’t you ashamed for still being here even though you don’t belong here.’ The FL really hates the MC because she feels like the MC stole her life for 18 years and should suffer. Then when the dad and brother were gone on a business she has a house party and MC comes home and people start harassing her and she mets a person who in the original story helps the FL sell her to some barbaric people who have a stupid son that live in a mountain? And MC is shook that the FL and him (An something) already know each other. She’s freak out and internally panicking and the ML comes to save the day. The FL is surprised and scared  that he came back early and disappointed. The ML tells her she has one hour to clean up, and so she gets rid of her friends. The FL went to the dad and kept crying that seeing the MC makes life difficult for her because she reminds her of everything she lost. So, he talks to the MC and gives her some money and properties for her to leave the house and telling her visit during the holidays. The next thing the FL did was that she got one of her loyal male friends to pay these three women to harass and accuse the MC of something and record it in hopes of making the MC look bad. The MP comes and rescues her because his like in love with her (I don’t know how this happened and it honestly doesn’t make any sense to me that it happened). MC thanks him and tells him that there’s someone behind them that set this up. And throughout the story FL and MP have no contact and never met. They investigate and it leads them to the the loyal male friend but he never snitches. So, since the MC got  injured by those people she couldn’t make it to this event but the FL went sung an English song. People on the internet were impressed and hyping her up. MC sees this and knows that the FL can’t sing to save her life, so Mc calls up her (Mc) manger and exposes this and MC like I got a plan. This plan, I’m so confused and don’t get how it could be a face slapped moment and it felt dull, the plan was for the MC to go on live and sing the same song as the FL and other songs too (which she did well in) and then challenge the FL? Because  the people on internet started harassing the FL and asking her to do live to prove herself.  So, the FL couldn’t handle the pressures anymore and contacts the MC for a private meeting and accuses her for taking roles from her, and stealing her life for 18 years, her brother and some other things exposing her for what she did to the MC. ML is in the background hearing ALL of this and MC and FL have NO idea. MC say something and slaps her and has guards hold the FL so that she could spill lemonade in the FL’s hair. After MC leaves and see ML she’s panicked but ML like ‘you did good, she deserves it.’ And that he was going to send the FL way aboard. MC goes what about dad? The ML goes don’t worry. FL gets sent aboard. We get her POV and she’s angry that the MC isn’t suffering and that she’s happy and also with the ML. So, because she’s with the ML she can’t do anything to the MC, so it’s best to forget about MC 

But if it’s about the MC we find out her parents aren’t sweepers like she and everyone thought, but from a powerful military family whose in line with her old family. Apparently, the people who raised FL, found a baby in the bathroom and they took her to a nurse and adopted her before the switched happened. And when the MC got kicked out of the family she decides to visit them but they weren’t warm to her and kept calling her ‘girl’ and then they told her the story. So, when all of the drama is being publicized by the media her real family see this and comes to find her. Her grandfather does and he tells her that they didn’t know about her existence until in the recent years and that they were trying to find her. He asks her if she want to met the family, she’s says yes and she does. Everyone’s welcoming and warm, and she’s the only girl in the family? Her male cousins are overprotective and kind towards her. She finds out that her mom had her when she was 16 years old and she had a mental breakdown when the the father of MC rejected her and the baby. So she left the newborn infant in the bathroom. She now lives in a mental institution. MC wants to met her and the family warns her to be patient. She asks to be in the room alone with her and the mother is unresponsive until she mentions that she’s the baby that was left at the hospital and the mother shouts ‘he didn’t want you’ people come in to clam her and she leaves the room. And before all this happen the family was talking about the scum guy that put her in this state. MC tells ML were his and he comforts her.


Honestly, this whole story line was rushed like it was all thought of last minute. Even the scene with the ML calling MC asking her where she’s at and comforting her, the whole interaction just felt forced to me. 

I feel so bad for the Ori!FL's adoptive family. They treated her with love and care... that usually leads to a well-rounded and loving individual. Sometimes our nature really is stronger than the nurture we receive. 

Yes, they have been searching for her for years and genuinely care and love for her, but there’s like 5 scene that we see them in 

Thank you for the spoilers, how did MC and MP react about finding out who her bio dad is? And how did they find out? 

Bio dad is scum.... the son was following his footsteps until he met his sister. He did stop being scummy afterwards.
The part that gets me.... the bio dads family is powerful but not that powerful. He is going around using girls of powerful families and he is still alive????      
I’m surprised that that family still exists and that thing in human skin is actually alive instead of skinned alive and rotting in some custom torture chamber. That part was a bit too much in this story especially when the FL family comes in ... as a military family you would think they can make such scum disappear or have a non fatal accident that removes his ability to hurt girls again. 

Ikr, they rise a white eyed wolf and i would love to see her suffering like how she wanted to see mc suffering  

Wtf the bio dad is the greatest scum. Mo Ze is 7-8yrs older than MC and there's still older siblings in the house. That means this fvkng pervert was around 10 or more than years older than bio mom. Bio mom gave birth at 16. This predator put his hand on a freaking minor. That's disgusting! Why isn't he in jail??? MC would be the greatest evidence of his crime! What's more, there's two family now backing the MC, why can't they kick this guy??? Makes me really angry.



Who would have thought that in the end, it would be Mo Ze engaging into incest. Rather than him not moving on, I rather like him to suddenly switch into a nice brother for MC. Since he's competing with ML initially, it would be a nice joke to say he's the real brother and diss ML for it.