World Embryo Chapter 1 Discussion

I hope that it was to unleash her power when she unzipped her coat. >.>



Otherwise, awesome start! I like the MC now, but I hope he receives some sort of character development as it goes on.

OK now that was a very good first chapter. show don't tell.



they gave exposition but didn't explain everything in detail, we get an idea about this post apocalyptic world but without explanation, quite mysterious. interesting powers as well im looking forward to the world building

Read some of this a long time ago, figured I’d finish it.



Pretty good first chapter. Can’t wait to see what else this series offers.

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                        What, what an intense chapter! Dat egg and that spider like demon. I like Arisugawa's personality tbh as she seems to be a badass who likes to be in control. Her outfit looks pretty good too.



Nice start so far overall, 5/5.