When I Was 16

It’s early so still hard to say, but it’s generally well written. It gives very similar energy to Supreme Magus if you like that novel, though given the title and synopsis, it’s likely to take a much different direction. If you like that novel, it seems likely you’ll like this one

What time is it ? Are you sleeping away, Author ?Update !

Oooouuuu yesss love me a good alpha novel. Really liking this novel. It’s pretty good give it a read ❤️

Let's go with the good first:= the story is great - it's about introducing technology to medieval world that have some level of fantasy= not that technical - most of the time author just explain 1 aspect then continue the story= a bit like slice of life - not too many inside problem, most of the time mc just try to solve outside his kingdom problem, the problem inside the kingdom usually solve by introducing more technologyNow the bad stuff:= editor - this novel seriously need a good editor, too many misspelled or wrong choice of word, there also grammar problem but not major in my problem, even mc name sometimes misspelled, this is really big problem that want me to stop reading the novel= ending of an arc - some of the arc just end abruptly, there is no aftermath details

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

CONTINÚARA...

I know folks that story is too short but you already know i m a pro writer it will take me sometime i can improve my writing and content so that i can increase the word count that can fulfill your appetite.

Anyway,I then closed my eyes,as a bright shine of light flashed,which meant that I was going to reincarnate.When I opened my eyes,I found that I was in a baby's body.