VRMMORPG: Emperor's Ascent

Shameless self review, its not perfect but I'll be writing what I would want in a VRMMORPG. I hope you check it out.

This novel is very good ! I just read the first chapter and I already like it. especially I like the mc's personality and world background. I hope the author can update more.

I've never really read a game genre before but this was intriguing to read, though there are a few grammar displacements, it was a good read too. There are only two chapters for now but the story's plot looks promising and interesting.

So far, I think your world-building is pretty cool. I like the RPG system you've picked up and the whole character customisation thing in the second chapter is also interesting to read as it gives the audience an insight on what the character's thought process and interests are like. I appreciate the element of comedy as well, the part about GOD and the abbreviation. I feel like you could add more description on your world building as well and tweak your grammar a bit in some parts. Otherwise, thank you for writing this. All the best, author :D

Wow, This story is amazing! I loved the first chapter, The fight scene and the cut to it being a commercial was a clever hook! Rpg-based novels are one of my favorite genres, so I’ll be reading this for the long run!

The story is amazing, and fresh the characters suit well with the story, the writing is good too, but there were errors like punctuation errors that were breaking the flow of sentences and some grammatical mistakes and minor typography mistakes if the author works on these he'll kill it..
Best of luck author you're doing great

Pretty good so far. The novel is in its early stages so I can't express my full view, but the way the characters are being developed, I see a great potential. BTW I really love the dialogues between characters. Keep up the good work.

Nice start interesting concept, hope you continue of in the future with great endeavour. I wonder what was that in the beginning, I hope it's expanded on.