Villain's Journey Towards Destruction

didnt get far. fake op mc and well I'm pretty sure it didn't take long for him to move on to another woman

Had high hopes on the novel. The synopsis was encouraging as well as initial chapters . But then things quickly went downhill. (dropped it on about chapter 30).
- Unnecessary extras. What do I care about the name of each of the 9 fingers of the villainous organization and what they look like. What does it matter to me that one of them attacked the office of local heroes and got off with heavy losses. And moreover, I don't care about a detailed description of his fight with the hero Porcupine.
- The weak emotional part of the work. In theory, given the circumstances of the hero and his ability, this should have become a pillar of the work. But no, this point is almost completely ignored. (The fact that this work is generally from a third person only makes the situation worse)
- Battles... what a masterpiece(no)... the hero is beaten - he flies away from inpact (unscathered). Beats the enemy in turn. If the enemy is weak, this is the end. If strong - enemy enters a new stage of his strength and the cycle repeats ... (and yes, according to the precepts of grandfather Madara, no one starts the fight in full force).
- Spoiler. I read the last chapters - the hero says that they defeated the gods and he himself became a god... it strengthened my resolve to grop the novel...
- And yes, romance. I usually have both hands for it in any work... but here it seems more pulled out of the finger than anywhere else

Reuploaded, my readers who used to read it previously, don't hate me too much! I joined the WPC #232 - Invincible category, and I hope you all will support me.

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This is one of my favorite superpowers novel.. I love the mc and he is one of my fave villain.. I can't wait for the next chapter everytime i finish reading one.. The fight scenes are awesome (kinda reminds me of how gokou and his enemies fight like 'destroy it all' kind of thing).. I recommend this book for all of you to read and let's join jack in his journey to destruction..

It's good and all, especially the early chapters but once you hit when he returns it's just so bad, like it's fine but I just hate how they make the whole love interest thing. I don't get why he needs this love interest so much. Can't the man just be alone bruh. Like I get that you want to add a female lead and all but you don't got to, that was the appeal of this whole novel to me. Is that this crazy dude goes on a eternal rampage unable to connect to the world due to being well a walking disaster. Anyways I've dropped it for now at least, might pick it up again and if I do I might change my review but I'm just leaving it like this.

Very good novel. It has some rough spots with grammar and words, but is overall an amazing story. Jack is realistic and feels like a real person. The world around him also feels real, mainly because of how oddly gray it is with morals. I hope to see more.

Good Novel.
I like that the MC didnt take like a 100 chaps for his revenge.
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