The villainess shall be mine

Author here! Almost 200 chapters.
New readers may think that this story is about the MC chasing a villainess girl and then they fall in love. Well, that's how it sounds, right? However, it's not... It's about pain and how to deal with the pain... When the whole multiverse wants you and your loved ones dead. When you get caught in an insane plot and it can drive you insane... Then from the insanity, you search for the right answer.  The story has a more complex take on the theme, with an extremely smart and omniscient antagonist. Well, it might not even be in the theme anymore. More like sarcasm. Moreover, the MC himself learns and evolves, mentally and physically. It's gruesome... The adventure is full of painful experiences... Loss and a lot of thinking, and more thinking... There seems to be no perfect answer... There are always unexpected twists Far from a romantic story. If you read you will know how complex the story is... I know that the earlier chapters were pretty average, even a bit boring, but if you manage to read up to chapter 130+, you will understand why this story is worth it!

This my first time writing a review and my English is pretty bad so sorry if I made any mistakes.

This is one of my favorite novels I discovered it by chance but it turn out that I found gold.


Writing Quality- there are almost no grammatical errors English isn't my first language so even if there's some grammatical errors they are negligible since everything is understandable.
the writing style is so good that you feel like you're inside the story especially the different POVs of the same moment, that's what truly suck you inside the story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


Stability of Updates - there's no need to talk about this, the update is daily without any delays⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


Story Development - steady development of the story with a lot of unexpected but enjoyable twists that make you eager to know what happens next and make you think of a lot of possibilities it can even make you join the {F5 SECT}.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


Character Design - maybe you won't like the mc at first but as you see him changes (becoming smarter,stronger, more confident and more aware about what's around him) you'll love him.
as for other characters they are so real that you can feel their emotions and understand their thinking⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐


World Background - it reminds me of the novel
but it's something bigger and mor diverse it makes you think we are just a speck of dust in the universe and there's something hidden in space that we didn't discover and it might reach us at any moment.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

-WARNING- THIS NOVEL IS ADDICTIVE, PROCEED WITH CAUTION.

Wow it's my first time writing something this long.

Very good story but I can tell that the story doesn't click with me. Might try to read more later but will probably not. Hopefully this gets finished and not dropped.

This is my first web novel and so far its very good, i am only on chapter 46 but i really like it. I got recomended to read this thru TikTok and i am glad i was

Hey author-San wanted to leave a review as well as a question I have…. First my question who is the main female lead, and the romance when we gonna see some development with Adam and whoever is gonna be is counterpart or even harem(which I am rooting for here HAREMMMM) (if you can answer that)
Next my review as of chapter 32 I love the story so far honestly have no compliants if I had any it would be the “split personality/primordial Authorities” amazing concept just it needs to fleshed out a pit more for me

Control your power authorr... if scientists get the scent of your amazingness, then they will surely take you away for experiments !
It's just an amazing book! It's super deep and super thought out!
I don't even know how to describe it, just go and read this absolute gem! GO!

Review that EVERYONE going into this story should read. With the emergence of the whole otome and villian webnovel/lightnovel genre, readers in the audience come with certain expectations. You expect a whole academy, a kingdom or what not. No, its not that this novel doesn't have that similar stuff. But as of this review which is the max chapters (40ish), the whole story is very different to what one would expect from coming in. The novel's world building, the amount of POV changes just for 1 particular scene, the slow pacing, the amount of exposition, the amount of deepness really suggests that this world powers will be as large as a CULTIVATION novel (Multiverse/universal level confirmed). All of this makes the novel feel quite heavy to read. This is definitely not your typical slice of life rom

com novel you would expect. Speaking of comedy, there was almost none of that and its very serious (though I expect it to come during the academy arc). About 20 chapters + that's when the story starts becoming less expository and heavy, but the qualities this novel have are still there. Not to mention, the story feels very shounen (tra*sh to strong) but on a seinen level of maturity (18-40 males). Lots of introspection to add to that. Thus, this novel's content is definitely not for everyone catered to this genre. It's a super big world and a serious take on the genre. If you cannot handle this, then I do not suggest picking it up because even the chapters feel long themselves. You probably won't be able to survive the first 25 chapters or so.

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Now I will go into some thoughts I personally have for the novel.

Writing linguistic- I was surprised to hear that the author is NOT a native. Because the English in this novel is quite good. The grammar and punctuation itself barely had any problems for webnovel standard. The most common mistake was commas where they shouldn't be. Even though fiction writing can exempt some things, half of what shouldn't there are plain mistakes. If there is an improvement, that would be to make it more flowery and better immersion. But that's difficult to do and I'm basically talking about the actual bookstore publishing level. In other words, as a webnovel quality it is satisfactory. However, I do suggest to tone down the POVs for new characters and keep in mind it will slow scenes down in the novel. Especially coming into the novel, I was overwhelmed. I can't imagine how it would be for a non-native.

Story development: Overall, because of its pacing its pretty good. Things are slowly fleshed out and not rushed at all. But one can easily imagine the downsides. If you read the above its not hard to find the consequences. I say its pretty good, but that's because I was able to somehow keep my retention and understand it. Some would REALLY Hate it because of how much content and expository is smashed in your face. It really reminds me of reading Earth's Greatest Magus (One of the all-time top stories on Webnovel). Thus for some people the story development can be very bad.

Characters are very good and developing well. I like the main ones so far and heavily look forward to them. The author with his POVs shows that he takes care in presenting them as 3D. Although if I had to be critical, they pale compared to a book-store level (they feel more like characters than humans). But on a webnovel level, very good and enough.

World Background- As large as a cultivation novel. Expect 600 chapters + at minimum. That's what it feels like.

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Conclusion:
It's a novel that can potentially be one of the top novels on this site. It's definitely a hidden gem. I hope this novel becomes at least one of my top 10 favourite novels on this site because it really does feel like it will become one. Every review of mine now ends with me wanting to ship. Oh wait... 40 chapters and with its pacing and lack of heroines I really can't. There's only 1 heroine really that we seen so far (a few? maybe have appeared but just brief). Author I beseech you to create a romantic drama! I wish for at least a strong heavy, dramatic love triangle at the minimum. (Think Oregairu and White Album 2). Harem in the sense of multiple girls interested around mc is preferred. Not in the sense of polygamy and such. You can write realistic characters and hopefully no ruin of story with sm*t. With your story, sm*t scenes should be used to really show that their relationship has extended to this level of LOVE. Not lus*.

1-2 wives is what I like: Love is war.

I want to ship! And enjoy the anticipation of my ship sailing or sinking. And the heart wrenching drama that unfolds. Not everyone gets a happy ending. Liu vs the Villainess. Doesn't this love triangle sound great if you focused on them? One's an ice cold beauty, another is an apathetic villainous. We don't need other heroines!

Imagine the dynamic interactions. Wouldn't it be so interesting? I would love it if you would do this. They are probably so similar too. You can play around the Mc's taste and that's why he feels great affection for both; however, struggles to choose as they're similar.

Ofc its more  complex than that but its stuff you can work around with for the complexity of romantic relationships. Awesome novel. Keep it up!

Pretty great book so far. Initially you would want to smack the MC on his head but he forces himself to change and his transformation feels natural.
And his abilities are pretty freaking great :0
Very well written chapters with a lot of stuff going on and yet everything fits in a proper flow.