The Quiet Connection

This is good for the first time writing. Good luck and waiting for the new chapter

I like tower climbing/dungeon novels with universal systems(most people have the same system just different abilties) in the first place, and this one is a good example of those with its power system lore and background we have seen those far and then you have the semi-unique part of readers/commenters being involved in this streaming system in a way that I have not seen before. To summerise what I said, good book I like want more.

Story is okay. Just not my cup of tea. The synopsis makes it seem like he becomes this OP villain and eventually pulls a badass goddess as a wife. In reality the Mc forces the goddess into a soul contract and is super weak. My guess is he won’t truly be a strong villain until the very end and I’m not really willing to wait that long, or spend the money on coins just for him to be slightly powerful. After his deal with the goddess he’s cursed into oblivion and no can no longer hold a weapon, learn spells/techniques, or control mana of any affinity. So we go from OP Mc to cursed Mc. It’s perhaps my least favorite way for authors to slow down power progression. You can slow growth without debuffing your character.

This has potential😀hope it continues   

Interesting characters and a fantastic story. Loved it as far as I have read. I do hope to read more in the future, and love the originality it packs!

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

the duties and obligations of becoming a villager?"

Emily who was healing him spoke up "You should be more cautious, this was only the fourth wave. There are three more waves and a boss before we can get out of this dungeon. Being a little careful could help, you know."