The Lord Of War

Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.Updating stability is ok.World background is good.All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.

It's a good concept from what I've read so far. However it needs deeper world building and character design with more detailed arcs. Some fights were barely a paragraph long and most chapters ended in the same way.

"To perform a blood binding with a Demon and not only live but also have no lasting damage, requires nothing less than power, either light or dark." She continued.

Back at the rebel side.

Pants: Leather pants (Deff: +5)

1. Empire

Embodying the principle of one who did not fight for the sake of one's self, but for the sake of others. A concept known as duty or responsibility?

"Thank you!" I said and heading towards office I was thinking what would happen inside.