Salad Days

The story so far is going WELL. My friends will LOVE this!Can't wait for more!

the story is pretty good and inspiring. But wanting to know whether the mc will introduce modern technology and weapons . Not immediately,  i mean step by step like first gun , canon then etc.

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First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.Pros:-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!-The title of the book is great and unique.-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.Cons:-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.

"Assistant take him to the Purify room."

The nightly scavengers howled in the night. roaming to find any which way they can find food, corpses where always at the top of the menu. The infant cried out in burst of tears alerting the pack. An infant they found, food they thought,  as they thrashed the infants left arm off. The now mortally injured infant roared in pain, bursts of tears now streaming. But fate had sometime been worse than death. The infant's fate was not to die there. The pain couldn't cause the infant to black out. The infant's thoughts where clear and pristine, it wanted to live. The infant summoned a creature, it's form was humanoid, and slaughtered the pack of wolves.

But the meteor men beg to differ

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older