Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World

The more the story progresses the more boring it becomes.Till now I do not understand what is the value of the system. It is like some bounty on his head and for months he is not progressing in cultivation. Man, this is supposed to be a system novel.

The author needs to go back and fix his early chapters. He promises that MC improves later but it is of no use if a new reader gets too frustrated with Mc's lack of IQ. MC behaves like a retard and rages on the system like a Karen. There is no character development over the 90 days of training and the MC is still the same.

He is confused about cultivation and reincarnation but later says that he is familiar with reincarnation novels. After he took a long time to understand stat points(which I will come back to) he is still confused about Skill points. How difficult is it to understand?

He also impulsively decides to dump stat points in one stat just to get out. Why is he in a hurry to get out? What if there is danger outside like how the system mentioned? After getting outside he again ranges on the system for not replying to him when the system clearly said that it is updating. This was too stupid for me to continue.

Please tell me that he is suffering from a debuff on his IQ due to his young master title because otherwise, his stupidness will be hard to explain. Don't say that he is new to the world and in shock. Shock lasts only for a short time, he should be able to adapt faster as a self-proclaimed nerd, plus it has been 90 days. The main reason I quit is because a reader who has read ahead said in the comments that this character and behaviour of MC persists for many more early chapters.

Bruh .I forced myself to keep reading based on 'MC will get better ' and ' story will get better . How much more torture do i have to endure, how many more braincells do i have to sacrifice before this actually gets better???!!!

I couldn't even complete three chapters The MC complains like an idiot Don't make a mistake, he really is an idiot.................................................

This story is just cliche.

That's all that really needs to be said, but I'll go on...

Cliche list:
MC treated like trash,
anything you want and more system,
max talent MC,
MC has no intelligence (despite what is claimed),
MC complains all the time despite not having to work as hard as any other person for his power (was complaining about working for months yet others have worked their entire lives),
auction scene (not as cliche as others as he was selling but very cliche),
alchemy (anything MC makes with his alchemy is better than what anyone else made and he obviously progresses as much in two months as others do in years),
fiance (I don't even need to explain this one),
family problems (one of the big families but is the declining one that has been teamed up on by the others).

I could go on but you get the point.  Not necessarily a bad novel but just one that essentially seems like a list of cliche rather than an original story.

After an eternity i read a original story on the same level as a top tier translated story. The mc is great and the story plays out really well its a hidden gem

Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.

This is a review after reading 52 chapters of the story.
The story is, like the title suggests, a cultivation story with a system.
Now, what I like about the story.
Pros :
1. The first person narrative that author uses. It’s extremely unique in cultivation novels which are usually done in third person. Refreshing for those that want to try a cultivation novel written in a different way than others.
2. Writing quality is excellent, I mean, there are no glaring flaws. That’s already an up as that’s all you really need. Author is pretty experienced, so this is to be expected.
3. Update stability is great, so that’s another major plus for the story.
4. Although MC has his flaws, what Mc has no flaw? The flaws are there to make us readers symphatize with the Mc and watch him grow. The longer we read, the more we see him fix his flaw and slowly mature into the ’ideal MC’
Cons :
1. MC relies too much on his system. Yes, it’s a system story, and I also get that one should exploit a cheat once they have it, but Mc needs to also learn to be more independent and instead of asking system all types of questions that he probably knows the answer to, ask more thorough ones that we readers don’t already know.
Of course not all of the information is useless as there is a lot useful one, but it can be a bit tedious.
Perhaps skip all those unecessary words by writing something like, ‘MC for the next hour or so asked MC all sorts of questions. Dumb as some of them were, he wanted to get everything straight, not missing anything out. After all, just a single detail could cost his life.’ Makes the MC look smarter and skips a lot of unecessary information that can be spread throughout the chapters.
2. This is more of a personal preference, but in first person narrative, I feel like the paragraphs are a bit too chunky. Can be cut shorter to be more pleasing to the eyes. (Just my personal preference.)
3. MC can be a bit indecisive at times, but that’s normal, jn fact, this is not even a con, I’m just putting it here in case Author forgets that character development exists. I get that MC is in an unfamiliar world, but CD is very important, don’t forget this.

Well, that’s all from me. Although it looks like there are more cons than pros, most of the cons are just my suggestions to author on how he could develop the story for future continuity.
Those flaws can easily be fixed and contribute to future of the story.
Good story, would recommend.