my undying love :who I met in a journey

like the concept of the power, and the atmosphere feels a bit biting you know, all in all good, but i don't know if this is a translation error from this platform or not, but there are some sentences that are not so relevant in my language.

This novel is amazing! Im giving it a 5 star.The passion and attraction, the twisted love shown by the main character is truly commendable. The webtoon is awesome. Im hooked and inlove!

Minions! Tonight we steal the moon!!I'm going to keep the review spoiler-free. I am only here to promise you that my writing will only get better as I write more chapters.Fret not, for the quality shall not diminish; nay, it shall ascend to heights yet unseen, ever waxing greater with time. If my family and financial situation do not fail me, I shall write till I drop off from the face of earth :)Please be nice in the comments since this is my first novel and English isn't my first language. I'll take any constructive criticism; just be kind. (cries)Also, feel free to ask me any questions in the replies!

Parece interesante, vamos a darle una oportunidad.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"Need a hand?" Snow asked from above. She was lying on her tummy with her hand stretched out. It was her turn to smirk, but it didn't last long as Snow began to grit her teeth.

Hindi po kasi ako makatulog,nag papantok lang po.

James suddenly sees a massive cockroach the size of a dog just sitting there as if it were waiting for commands. Above it, he sees a little bit of red text.